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so i like to write...tho i'm not that professional...but well all i do is at least try to express myself as best and creatively as i can...hope you guys like...and like always i'll appreciate any input or criticism...thanks...

One Direction

I sit and ponder on the past,
looking back to good old days,
hoping all the good will last,
though it ends just as a phase.

Released from time and its flow,
I’m cease to move in my head,
attached to what I can’t let go,
back to when no tears were shed.

I am here yet I’m also gone,
all I want is to have it back,
but time continues to go on,
reminding me to stay on track.

Time tells me that I cannot stay,
The past can’t make me happy,
I’ve somehow made it to today,
now I feel twice as crappy.

False happiness begins to fade,
time seems like an endless waste,
nothing I can do I’m afraid,
life is meant to be embraced

Some people say life isn’t fair,
but life is always on the move,
continuing to go somewhere,
no matter if you disapprove.

I’m alive, I shouldn’t complain,
happiness will follow along,
I have to work through the pain,
I just wish it wouldn’t take long.

Now I have to find my way,
happiness will wait for me then,
we’ll reunite soon some day,
and I’ll be happy once again.


Yes it is not too bad, xxxx


well if you have anything to point out...feel free to do so...i can't very well get any better if i don't know where i'm going wrong...lol...


I think you did a really good job Jony keep up the good work


U r welome Jony


Jony it is a very good poem....Can't really see anything wrong with it...

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