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I'm sending this to a special girl for Christmas and I want to know what you guys think

What You Do To Me

I don't exactly know how to put this into words
But I'll give it a shot for everything it's worth
You make me smile woth everything you say
AndI get excited when I even see your name
I blush uncontrollably when you complement me
I'd be so embarrassed if you were to actually see
You're like my drug, my addiction, I can't explain
If I don't talk to you, I feel a little bit more insane
There's these feelings surfacing that I've never felt before
And I sing love songs a little bit more
The walls I put up are non-existent with you
You don't even try to get passed them, you just do
And you made it so easy to fall for you too
You're always on my mind, no matter what I have to do
I kind of turn into the girl in the romantic movies
But I don't mind because it's what you do to me


Tanisha I would have to say go ahead and give it to her. Sounds like you're speaking from your heart.


Thanks Mark

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