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Give me the drink
To make the pain go away
The forgotten love
The mistaken trust
The broken bruises
The love that he used for lust
I left behind my decency when the spell of love cast my eye
It tore me apart thinking.....why..... Oh why
It was more than I thought it would be
I though I could get over him so easily

The lack of truth that’s coming from those lips I once kissed so passionately


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Wow, James, that's scary. Keep up the good work. Write, write, write.


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In this poem I feel you are feeling betrayed by all the lies that sucked you in and left you empty. All we can do when this happens and everyone has felt this one time or another- is to pick your feet out of the muck and don't waste your time feeling the pain because that person was selfish and was only looking out for themselves. They are the ones who have nothing in the end. As my gay brother always says: "Tears in a bucket, mother fuck-it!!


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fair words XD and im always a happy guy i always look on the posative side of things so =) this is like when i did feel so i have changed alot since tht happend so ^^


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Jeanie, that's a mighty catchy quote there.


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being gay has many bad things, but also many good things too =3


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Fantastic absolute truth. I so relate. Thank you so much for sharing. I want to read more!!!!!!!!!!


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thank you thats very nice of you to say, for alol of you to say =) xx


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yea, Jack my brother is great. He is very positive and has helped me a lot in my life.


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thats good to hear, i always stay posative and happy and smiley no matter wht =D


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Brilliant poem, you can basically taste the emotions in it, it's that visible. Really makes you also feel what is going on in the poem. Good work.


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