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These felling inside of me
I never before let myself feel
How I long to feel her lips against mine
I just want to tell her she is so fine
Her smile lights up the room
It sweeps away all my gloom
I could stair into her eyes for days
Just wish I could stay
If only I knew the right things to say
When I am with her it makes my day
My hands on her hips,
Oh how Love her curves
I just hope I can give her everything she deserves
She gets who I really am, my heart , my soul
This is something that can’t be bought
Someday I will find her
Someday when I least expect it
She will come into my life
We will share our hopes,fears,dreams
The further is our don’t you see
Just look inside yourself
Don’t be afraid to dream


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nice


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I liked the last part better than the first. Poetry does not have to rhyme and many great poets you read , I have found sometimes need to be re-read to find the connection between lines. e.e.cummings is one of those kind of poets. You had more flow in your thoughts I noticed near the end and I sensed you felt more relaxed to just let it all out and stopped worrying about the rhyming and it had nice flow too.


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Kabbu_Solid
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my god very nice


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I searched, longed and craved this imagined person.
Yet the moment I yielded my conquest,
You gracefully appeared into my life.
I wanted more, needed more
Yearned for more
Every laugh, every smile
Coursed through my veins,
Rehabilitating my once vacant heart.
I’m now whole because of you.
And ill do anything for you.
I’ll conquer the impossible.
Ill do anything for us.


i wrote this for my gf a few months ago...i thought it somewhat correlated to your poem...never thought id find her...but i did


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congrats an lovely poem..


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Racheal_Peterson
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Thank you Cassy that was beautiful


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Wow Cassy I would love to meet someone who felt that way about me. He-a-v-y!!


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