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a smile so enticeing
stopping a heart in a glance
as hope to curress the smile in a kiss
of the smile so enticeing
to kiss unending the enticening smile
yet to curress with longing lips./.......


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KAREN_WENDI
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lovely poem


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thanks


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KAREN_WENDI
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since i am a writer also id lke to leave u a criticism but dont be upset its just constructive
dont use the word ''smile to often u have made the point and it is redundant to repeat it
its beautiful and the feelings are strong u need to continue theres more u have inside to say beautiful sdtart xoxo
ps the teacher will always come out in me lol
kiss
karen


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a smile so enticen lifted an swelled a heart of careing past the stars
as waiting for nest passionant kiss eckoed a longing for a kiss to come
yet with held in times to come......



had to do rewrite giggle not mind crities it how learn...


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KAREN_WENDI
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betta love it!
k


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giggle thanks


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KAREN_WENDI
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ur so very welcome keep writing! k


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stopping me from weaveing poems like holding my nose i need to weave poems


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