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well i'm done with poem #11...but well let's see if it's as good if not better than my other ones...the inspiration came from the time i first started writing poetry...as you can tell...enjoy guys...give me your honesty...

The Imagination of Poetry

Poetry is more than writing fancy words,
I used to believe I couldn’t write a line,
I was never one of the English nerds,
now look at me, I’m doing fine.

Poetry works wonders for the writer,
the freedom to release from one’s self,
making the joys of life even brighter,
this is something I’ve experienced myself.

Poetry to me is more popular than fashion,
to write my thoughts and emotions as they flow,
so that many can read my words full of passion,
giving them a sense of what I see and what I know.

Poetry consists of heart, mind, and soul,
without these things a poem isn’t complete,
they are what take a reader on a stroll,
into the lives of others both bitter and sweet.

Writing poetry can be the greatest sensation,
I’ve told you how to go, now you lead the way,
guide us into your world of immense imagination,
let the whole world know what you have to say.


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cheer well done always beleave so an it be so good job


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Homer_Bozarth
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jony, well done on yet another great poem


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Dave_Mack
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You hit another bullseye with this one!


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notice that i've ditched the (...) haha...i kinda forgot that they use commas...that site Dean H. referred me has helped...but still...i have my lovely #1 supporters here...and still i choose to share with you guys 1st...i'm glad you guys liked the poem...i think this one is dedicated who doubt their skills...and well anyone can do anything they love to do...and well i love writing poetry now...as you guys can see...hopefully i don't get too many critiques on the other site...haha...


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that will be a small surcharge for suport giggle j/k was good poem


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well made you enjoy the replys no worry over crittics they over payed oppion makers


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well still critiques aren't bad...i kinda need them in order to improve my writing...


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always seems perfect till re read


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well i've re-read some...and agree that they were good and need work...and i have some that are perfect the way they are...


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happens giggle no worry


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yea they'll improve as i get better...i know...


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Each time you write a poem you leave a little of your heart in the words.
The lines are linked by your loves and fears as you give the verses birth.
Sometimes with love, sometimes with tears, and maybe even mirth.
But always it's torn from your heart and soul, into a waiting world


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i noticed that but they words to share


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true...very true...i posted this poem on the writing site...and they like it...no critiques yet...just compliments...so let's see how it goes...


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doh triggered a poem hope happy now ha ha


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Michael_Wolfe
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A very nice poem it seems to come from the heart and thats were all of the poems come from..Sorry I was gone a few days so was just now to comment..


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that's alright...better later than never...haha...lol...


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Michael_Wolfe
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LOL...You so sweet Jony....


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Homer_Bozarth
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i agree with Micheal, Jony is a sweet guy


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He is real hot and really good at writing poetry too


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Homer_Bozarth
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yes he is sweet Dean


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