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Seeing is believing or so we think…
But our eyes and mind play tricks…
Things changing with every blink…
Could reality be beyond these bricks???

But how can I get beyond this wall???
Climbing over is not a good choice…
This wall is just far too tall…
“Try something else” says my inner voice…

How about I just break it down???
That would work if I was superman…
My once happy face is beginning frown…
My inner voice says, “Think of a better plan…”

The more I think the more I go insane…
My inner voice not helping me at all…
Why would he if there is nothing to gain…
His intentions towards me are only to stall…

Please I beg you, have mercy on me…
Can’t you see how this makes me feel???
This is not a place where I want to be…
Allow me to return to a world that is real…

He says, “Alright you are no longer fun…
Now shut your eyes close them tight”…
He finally gave in so have I won???
Have I truly regained my sight???

Once he gets a hold of you…
There is nothing you can do…
Twisting reality making it untrue…
Be careful or he’ll get you too…


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nice


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oh- see you already posted it! Great!! I call this fear. When we let our subconscious dictate our decision it like fear that keeps you from doing what you wanted to do. Or is it just not being sure? When you put at the end "Be careful or he''ll get you too" it made me think of fear.


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yes...you're right...this does sound more like fear...maybe i should re-think the title...but yea...i decided to post it anyways...because well i'm bound to have good and well not so good poems...but well that's why i like getting pointers so i know how to get better...i think i got a new title...i just thought of it...Behind the Fear...


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there a little fear in confusion


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let's put our titles together...how about "The Face Behind Fear"...sounds cool and a bit dramatic...and i'm all in for dramatic most of the times...


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