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Sweet and Gentle Moon - Poetry Group

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Oh sweet goddess of the moon…
Patiently I have waited for so long…
Whisper in my ear your magical tune…
Sing to me your enchanting song…

As you look at her only to sigh…
Behold her face shining from afar…
Illuminating the entire sky…
She holds more beauty than any star…

A sacred promise she holds to keep…
Protecting us one night to another…
Watching over us as we go to sleep…
Like her there is and will be no other…

She glides through the sky every night…
We fall under her spell and into a dream…
Her gentle caress descends as moonlight…
Embracing us with her love so it would seem…

Oh gentle goddess of the moon…
Now you must go on your way…
I pray that tomorrow night comes soon…
For I will miss you throughout the day…


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nice


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thanks i absolutely loved writing this poem...


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it seemed a passion from words keep up good work


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yes...the moon has always been special to me...


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William_Becker
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I was just learning how to make moon water. I love your poem.....


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Its nice to read poetry that is about giving up and sorrow and pain. Been seeing too much of that lately. This is so refreshing.
I love poems about the moon and you don't make it haunting like it could have been. Very nice.


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thanks William and Jeanie...yes i too feel refreshed when i read this poem...well i don't really find that the moon haunts us as i've seen it been used in some poetry...i see a more gentle side to the moon...as i've expressed in this poem...


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Yes I love the moon. When it is full it is almost like a cloudy daylight and you can almost see everything. I have surfed in the full moon as a teenager and it was so much fun. Now that I think about it , it was also stupid because sharks could get us however now that I think about it they do not see well and at night it probably would be harder for them to spot us. I'm not sure of that though. I have walked in the moon light on the beach too with people I love. I love the peacefulness at night too and a full moon makes it so special.


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