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well here comes poem #9...i've been looking at the moon for some time...and wanted to write a poem dedicated to her...the moon for some reason is very special to me...and as i was writing this poem...i felt a heartwarming emotion...which i hope you guys can sense in my poem...and well here goes my moon poem...

Sweet and Gentle Moon

Oh sweet goddess of the moon…
Patiently I have waited for so long…
Whisper in my ear your magical tune…
Sing to me your enchanting song…

As you look at her only to sigh…
Behold her face shining from afar…
Illuminating the entire sky…
She holds more beauty than any star…

A sacred promise she holds to keep…
Protecting us one night to another…
Watching over us as we go to sleep…
Like her there is and will be no other…

She glides through the sky every night…
We fall under her spell and into a dream…
Her gentle caress descends as moonlight…
Embracing us with her love so it would seem…

Oh gentle goddess of the moon…
Now you must go on your way…
I pray that tomorrow night comes soon…
For I will miss you throughout the day…


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Daniel_Markov
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una poema per la LUNA che bello.--nice


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Nice one Jony,. Bathe in the silent light of the moon


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i'm glad you guys liked it...because i absolutely love it...


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Michael_Wolfe
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I have to say I really like this one..When every my hubby and I are apart we always look at the moon at a certain time and say I love you..Keep up the good work..


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aww...that's so nice...and thanks Michael...


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Homer_Bozarth
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aww so sweet


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just beautiful,as the moon controls our lives and the seasons we live in


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Oscar_High
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I liked Jony, really nice! The moon always capture my attention, I feel facinated!


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thanks again guys...i'm glad that you all liked this poem...and i'm glad you feel fascinated Andres...


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Oscar_High
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(^.^)//


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well i'm working on my next poem...just need to figure out what direction i'm trying to go with it...and let my emotions flow as usual...so keep on the lookout for poem #10... ; )


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Michael_Wolfe
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We will be waiting with bells on


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Jony
Try joining this site, it is for people who write poems and stuff and there are REAL poets on there to make comments and give you advice, I have joined

http://www.writingforums.com

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Michael_Wolfe
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Dean are you saying that some of us might not be poets or don't now how to write poems...


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well i'll join the site...and well you don't have to be a poet to appreciate any poetry...i post my poems here and in the poetry group...i post it in the poetry to get suggestions and insight...i post it here because i also wanna share it with people who aren't in the poetry group...for the same reasons...to get feedback...and that's the same reason i will join the site to get share and get feedback...


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NO Michael, but there are far more experienced POETS on that site who can really give helpful advice. Im sorry if I upset anybody, seems I just can't say the right thing lately, or anything


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Don’t forget how to Dance

The sky looks grey, clouds crowd around
It has rained on your party again.
Nothing goes right, everything fails
Life’s such a terrible strain.
This is not worth it so why go on
Why bang your head on the wall?
Bury yourself, shun all the world
To try is to head for a fall.

Don’t forget how to dance,
Feel the music again.
Life is not waiting for the storms to pass
It’s learning to dance in the rain.

Too much to do, much to achieve
They are asking too much of just me.
I can’t go on, I cannot do that
I’ll fail, why can’t they see?
I am not that good, I’m not that bright
When will I ever be free?
The effort’s too much, I’ll fall short
It’s certain, not just what might be.

Don’t forget how to dance,
Feel the music again.
Life is not waiting for the storms to pass
It’s learning to dance in the rain.

I don’t look good, my shape’s all wrong
I’ll can never be part of that crowd.
I’ll never fit in, always outside
My part to be always alone.
Life in the shadows, alone, apart
Never to run in the sun.
Monochrome life, of grey and gloom
A lifestyle that’s only for one.

Don’t forget how to dance,
Feel the music again.
Life is not waiting for the storms to pass
It’s learning to dance in the rain.

I’m so weary, tired, alone;
With a heart so heavy, like stone.
Can my feet find rhythm again?
How can I sing whilst I moan?
If my feet could dance then my heart might sing;
The sun could rip through the cloud.
The gray lit with colours that zing
And I will then dance with the crowd.

Don’t forget how to dance,
Feel the music again.
Life is not waiting for the storms to pass
It’s learning to dance in the rain.


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Posted

nah don't worry about it Dean...i loved your poem...


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Homer_Bozarth
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Dean, your poem is from the heart. i love it.


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Thank you Jony and Homer


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Homer_Bozarth
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your welcome sweet Dean


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Michael_Wolfe
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@Dean I said what i said because I too write poems but I don't post them because they are more to th one I love and not aboubt the world or what is going on in life..I have always said that you and Jony write good poems and now after reading your last one it is jsut as good as the others that you wrote ...Maybe I will get my poems out of the box they are in and post some to see what you all think...


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for sure mike...i mean sure they're dedicated to one you love...but they're love poems...i'm sure you could share...i mean that's if you really want to...but i'd love to read one...


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