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Shifting Skies... - Poetry Group

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The day has only begun…
The clouds are sad and gray…
I wish I could feel the sun…
Let the sun shine on this day…

Each day the same old rain…
There is really nothing new…
Today just seems so plain…
I miss the sky when it was blue…

Listen to the thunderous roar…
Each bolt dancing in the sky…
I feel the urge to open the door…
I guess I’ll give this storm a try…

I open the door and run outside…
I feel the water cleansing me…
I never want to return inside…
I’ve never felt myself so free…

Thunder continues roaring loud…
Lightning dancing to its song…
I begin to love this storming cloud…
As I feel myself growing strong…

Riding storms can be worthwhile…
But the clouds go on their way…
The sun has blessed me with its smile…
Let the sun shine on this day…


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nice


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thanks...i changed some words at the end...i think it sounds better...


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your the creator it has to be perfect to you


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yea...sometimes better words seem to come out after i think i was finished...but you're right about it being perfect for me...the poem is never complete til you feel satisfied...& i'm pretty sure...that now i'm satisfied with each word in my poem...


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cheer giggle i a great suporter


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Really like that Jony. It flows real nice. I am always changing my poetry. In fact right now I am revamping some I wrote in the mid 70's. Oh, oh showing my age. No big deal!LOL I love poety because you can use words to mean other things as so many words have other meanings too. I will submit one after I write this to show you an example of what I mean. I know you know but just the same I will start a discussion and submit the poem and you can tell me what you think too. Love this group! as I love to read poetry.


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