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so i haven't posted in a long time, and i felt that i should post something. i just started writing this, but its not finished, i just can't seem to find the words. i just haven't been able to write, and when i do, its not like what i usually produce. so i've tried to make them go side by side, but its not working. so imagine them side by side haha

Tear me apart,
I see your side, and mine. And it
tears me apart from the inside
out. Your words like ice against
my skin. I know I will only
disappoint you.

I can feel myself falling, slipping,
sliding off the track. I’m saying
things I don’t mean and becoming
colder and colder.

This is the last thing I wanted. I
thought I was in control of this. I
keep pinching myself hoping this
is all a dream and I’ll wake up your
arms, but it’s not. I fear I’ll die alone.

Just let me in,

I see you staring, open up to me.
Just as I’m beginning to like you, you
shut down. I can’t help but wonder what
I’ve done wrong and what I can
do to fix it.

I know we could make this work
if I could just know what you’re
thinking, but I can feel you getting
more and more distant and I’m scared.

You’re slipping and I can feel it. I
can feel you tremble when we touch.
Your words so cold, I don’t know what
to do anymore. Your heart is like an ice
Box and I can feel me giving up.




so do you want help with an ending to it? Very intense! is any of it related to you personally?


Haha kinda, the cold one is me. I guess it could be a relationship between two another person and I, or a struggle within myself. And I'm not sure