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I wrote this to be a song, but I can't write music


Don’t forget how to Dance

The sky looks grey, clouds crowd around
It has rained on your party again.
Nothing goes right, everything fails
Life’s such a terrible strain.
This is not worth it so why go on
Why bang your head on the wall?
Bury yourself, shun all the world
To try is to head for a fall.

Don’t forget how to dance,
Feel the music again.
Life is not waiting for the storms to pass
It’s learning to dance in the rain.

Too much to do, much to achieve
They are asking too much of just me.
I can’t go on, I cannot do that
I’ll fail, why can’t they see?
I am not that good, I’m not that bright
When will I ever be free?
The effort’s too much, I’ll fall short
It’s certain, not just what might be.

Don’t forget how to dance,
Feel the music again.
Life is not waiting for the storms to pass
It’s learning to dance in the rain.

I don’t look good, my shape’s all wrong
I’ll can never be part of that crowd.
I’ll never fit in, always outside
My part to be always alone.
Life in the shadows, alone, apart
Never to run in the sun.
Monochrome life, of grey and gloom
A lifestyle that’s only for one.

Don’t forget how to dance,
Feel the music again.
Life is not waiting for the storms to pass
It’s learning to dance in the rain.

I’m so weary, tired, alone;
With a heart so heavy, like stone.
Can my feet find rhythm again?
How can I sing whilst I moan?
If my feet could dance then my heart might sing;
The sun could rip through the cloud.
The gray lit with colours that zing
And I will then dance with the crowd.

Don’t forget how to dance,
Feel the music again.
Life is not waiting for the storms to pass
It’s learning to dance in the rain.


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Jon_Buckby
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how does it sound when you sing it? can you pin down the notes your using?


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Good evening Dean trust you well?That is a lovely song there you have written.
Only I'm sorry that is a gift i cannot write music wishing you every success with it. xxx


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Richard_Edwards
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beautiful lyrics


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All the best with it Dean, i think it's Great XD xx


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Allen_Thikeo
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Usually I find it helpful to come up with the melody by pressing a bunch of piano keys together. It sometimes helps getting a melody down. Then after that add a few percussions, drums, so on and so on. And there we go. Thats how I usually make music.


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Hi Dean, Sorry can not help with the music bit but the words are very good . Hope you find someone to write for you.


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It is a very good poem Dean.. sounds like me.... I write tunes but probably not what would fit this.


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SRECKO_MARTAC
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very nice song


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Dave_Mack
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Dean may I suggest, for the moment you listen to some instrumental songs and see how the general flow of them feels with your lyxics. That way you would have an idea what works best with them. Then from there look for someone to actually write the music.
As the others have said they are great. I think the British expression is SPOT ON?


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