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Cross- Road - Poetry Group

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Stuck in-between,
There's nothing to see
No chance of being,
Nothing, but me

Faking a smile
Behind tear- shed eyes
Nothing but makeup,
To hide all the lies

Stuck in the world
With no one to care
No one wants to see her,
Through her long brown hair

Stuck at a cross- road
With no way to turn
No matter which way,
She'll never learn

So where do you go
When both ways are wrong?
Where do you go
If the road is too long?

No light at the end of the tunnel,
There's nothing to see,
No chance of being
The girl I wanted to be.


Breanna_M_Kelly
Posted

i really love you poem. you put alot of feeling in to this, nice i am now a fan ^_^ good work taylor


Posted

Awh thank you so much, that means a lot!


Posted

It makes me think of Frost's poem, when he talks about taking the road less traveled by. Torn apart by two different choices, two different ways of being the person you want to be but can't. Feeling like you're losing hope; not seeing the light at the end of the tunnel. Overall, I like the poem and the rhyming scheme too.

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Posted

Thanks!


Marc_R._Sherland
Posted

It's very much in the song lyric style, do you play any musical instrument?


Posted

I wrote this about three years ago actually. And no, no instrument, I would love to learn though!



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