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when will it be my turn - Poetry Group

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Breanna_M_Kelly
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when well it be my turn,

to stand in the light,

when will it be my turn,

to be along your side,

laugh, play, and to stay by your side,

when will it be my turn,

to be the one you talk about,

to be with you, hold you, kiss you

when will it be my turn.


Breanna_M_Kelly
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thank you ^_^ very much.


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I think what I like best about this is how common these thoughts and feelings really are. It doesn't matter who you are, if you love someone, you would more than likely have thought this at some point in time. Great job capturing this feeling.


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yes Erin I agree. Wondering - feeling- wanting to be loved in return - we all want that.


Breanna_M_Kelly
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thank you very much ^_^ to the both of you Erin and Jeanie i glad that you really enjoy, my poem



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