Jump to content
Cassie_Salter

Sunrise - Poetry Group

Recommended Posts

Posted

I wrote this for a friend, i actually have no attraction for them, they just asked me to write them something, again, not my best but whatever

Your smile like a sunrise,
beautiful and warm. Fill
me up with you. I’ll
breathe in your oxygen
and hold you tight. Every
bone in my body wants
what I cannot have.
Yet, you fill me with a
happiness I have never
felt before. You’re like a
strange addiction I
can’t shake, I’m addicted
to you. Find me at the level
of your heart, lost in your
arms. I’m at peace with myself,
a credit I can only give to you.


Breanna_M_Kelly
Posted

that whats up i like your poem. i wirte them myself but i dont know if im any good


Breanna_M_Kelly
Posted

i dont know i just thought your poem was good.


Breanna_M_Kelly
Posted

welcome, and tell me what you think of my poem i posted like a min or 3 ago


Posted

I wrot e poem for a friend I use to have and called it "Carols Bad Day"
Here is it is. Don't feel like putting it on a discussion tab.

Sitting outside in the rain,
Images flow freely,
As the anguish of defeat
Brings rivers of tears
That well up in your eyes.

Reflecting on your own existence,
As the rain streams from your face,
You see distorted images of everything,
And feel out of place.
Your brain is in overload,
Flustered at the struggles,
Of everyday life;
Hopelessness seeps in like a fog,
Strangling any positive thoughts.

As you reflect,
And give in to the misery of life,
Questions pop up in your brain,
And the salty rain of tears,
Dry on your bewildered face.

You say to yourself,
Why do I go on
When I will end up in one place?
As you look up to see the sun,
Peering through the cloud,
Seeking answers to your grief.

You must open you heart,
And rest your wondering mind,
Accept the challenge,
That life is really hard.
When you can see,
The peace you have within you,
The struggles fall away,
And your confidence unfolds,
Like a slow moving wave.

As you leave sorrow,
Fall away like a flower petal into the glistening sun,
You recapture what life has taught you,
By reflecting the lessons that you have learned.

We do have angels around us;
They are the friend’s who care,
They are the eyes of eagles
And minds of the hawks,
They see our future and our thoughts,
They are the loved one’s who have passed before us,
And caress us in their love.

Catch a flattering glimpse,
Of the joys that are around us.
And with wisdom,
Horizons open up and teach us,
Giving us fresh ideas,
As each day unfolds,
Helping us to refocus,
Of what life has in store,
Because we decided,
Of how it’s to be told.



×