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Drowning in Love. - Poetry Group

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Kayliegh_May
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Currents caress pulls ever deep,
torn between bliss and the need to weep,
the utter darkness; a realm of obscurity,
just out of reach recedes reality,
overwhelmed with the urge to catch a breath,
filling lungs with the calmness of death,
lulled into the deepest of sleeps,
the ocean lures it's lovers for keeps.

-ktcm


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That is absolutely beautiful! Thank you for sharing!


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Kayliegh_May
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Thank you, heh. You're very welcome. If you enjoyed this one, you may like Car Crash, another terrible instance I tried to make beautiful =P


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I'll check it out, for sure!


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I like this, vivid and real.


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Kayliegh_May
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Thanks, it's was a harder one, and maybe more of an experiment to write something I've not gone through. I've never drowned thankfully xP *ehugs for all*


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I really enjoyed this. I wrote something a long time ago in 1995 and I call it
"To Have or Have Not" look in the discussion of this poetry section.


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Kayliegh_May
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Will do lady and glad you enjoyed it xP


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