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Noisy. Crowded.
jostling for rank
striving for importance
for notice to be taken
My Thoughts.
tumbling around
filling my head
each one needing
to be picked apart and shred.

Loud. Bold.
full of pride and pumping
passion through my veins
an ever-present thumping
My Heart.
bursting with emotions
of every size and colour
bright and fiery
never to be smothered.

Free. Unreliable.
accountable to none.
flying ever-higher
soaring with the sun
My Soul.
unrestrained and flowing
always seeking knowledge
never to be caged
at home within the folliage.

Me.


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Kayliegh_May
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You sound like a pretty awesome person from what I can tell, assuming this is truly about you.=3 Not only kudos on the writing but you yourself.


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wow haha thank you so much! this is just a random blurb sort of rant i jotted down today. glad you like it!


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Kayliegh_May
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Not a problem. =P Compliments where they're due lady. =3 Rants can be the best form of poetry at times. xP


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I like this. It's a great rant lol. But I like the flow and feel the power of your freedom!


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thanks!


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