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The sky pours rain
icy bullets strike me down
water consumes me
surrounds me
is me.
I flow swiftly all around
seeping into the grass and mud
becoming one with nature
becoming what I want to be,
a spirit; bodiless and free.


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reminds me of summer
when i was young :] kind of mixed emotions about how to feel
happy or sad lol thanks


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Thanks, I actually wrote it in the summer when I was a little younger. And not sure whether I intended it to give happy or sad emotions aha


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lol i understand that
guess it's left to be interpreted by readers


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certainly


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I think it's good. Wanting to just free to be.


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thanks


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