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Kayliegh_May

Bottom of a Bottle. - Poetry Group

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Kayliegh_May
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These rivers have frozen upon my skin,
my insides burning and blood so thin,
the fever is rising and pulsing along,
like a trembling beat of a broken song.
My cracked lips part for this fiery kiss,
drowning myself in the deepest abyss,
consciousness wavers as I try to forget,
everything fades but this silhouette.

-ktcm


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its different from the others, its really good....i like this its nice, it has a flow about it.


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i got a lot from this
love love love it


Kayliegh_May
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Lmfao, maybe because this one was wrote while I was trashed then was sobering up... but not quite sober.


Kayliegh_May
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Thanks Britt =)


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you write well even trashed...you are talented,, LOL


Kayliegh_May
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Hahah trust me, it took a lot longer. Fevered lovers I wrote stoned (pot)... and didn't remember writing it at ALL. At the end of the year I was cleaning out my math class binder and I was like O.o; What the hell is this, and it was like I was reading it for the first time. xP


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laughing.....
again you make me laugh, well at least it was good.
but u know sometimes being stoned can bring out the creative side of ppl....


Kayliegh_May
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Apparently... my math binder was filled with many odds and ends that year. That was the first year I'd smoked pot and finally this year I am thinking it's about time I quit =P


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hmm... maybe its a good thought.


Kayliegh_May
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Well it's stopped being something I enjoy... and it's stopped helping me in the way it used to, it's become a crutch, and something that actually makes me scared... so best option, quit. =P To each their own though.


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lol awesome kayleigh
weed just makes me tired
or numb, which i already am lol


Kayliegh_May
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Yer, I used to smoke it to numb myself to certain things and focus on having fun with my friends.


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using to numb yourself is a good reason to stop. after a while you wont be able to feel anything.


Charlene_Elizabeth
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I like it


Kayliegh_May
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Why thank you Charlene. =)



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