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I try to tell you
For the many times you never heard or cared
Opening my heart out to you
Remember i told you i loved you
Going rate was infinity, you still slapped a price on it
Out poured more lies
Tired i gave in
Heavy my heart still was
Organs bleeding over my internal shell
Withdrawing into my own world
There i found enough comfort
Opening my eyes to a brighter side
Capturing what i lost in you eyes
Around me
Radiant beauty
Everything i found, you took away


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wow deep..but i noticed you write deep poetry and its so powerful.
its really good i love to read your work.
you and kayleigh have the coolest poems. and Cassie has the prettiest as far as her wording...she can use word so elegantly.

love your work!!!


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thank you


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Britt you know how to put it!
Conforming to the point of oneself vanishing!

Have we walked in similar foot prints left behind.......
Hoe are these days?


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well i noticed that my passion for woman started to slip, i used to be active, and i enjoyed the chase very much. but as of late, i couldn't explain i why stopped caring, it's not that i'm not attracted woman
i realized, i forgot how it felt
so i did a little thinking, wrote somethings down
it was that lovers took my passion away, they killed it with pleasure,
and i was left behind, when someone kissed me, i forgot how to care
when someone touched me i forgot how to care
when some was hurt bc i starved them of my attention, i forgot how to care
and so on, lol you get it


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yeah i get it and wow your just like kayleigh you tell things in such a way its all poetry very cool!!
anyway it seems you had too much of a good thing (so to speak) and you became numb to it, and that could explain why u couldnt feel anymore.
it happens.... like an over dose of pleasure.
when something like that happens you become jaded. has things changed for you since this occured?


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overdose i like that, it sums up what i said lol
no, no they have not, lol. i've feel like i'm drowning lately
but it's like ups n downs, sometimes numb, sometimes sad
but i'm only human lol


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give it time your feelings are all over the place right now, it will pass.
keep writing it helps...


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lol thanks kat XD


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your welcome brittany.


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