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Kayliegh_May
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Alright... so I was looking for a poem so hardcore... that I actually googled myself with "poem" and found it on a site I don't remember being on O.o; But anyways, regardless!

The sky painted an ocean depth blue,
blades of grass gathering dew,
sparks flying on the lone stretch,
screams from beyond so hard to catch,
a frantic thumping of a hearts beat,
laying my head down in defeat,
a blaze dancing before ones eyes,
unable to pick out the others cries,
blaring sirens were a hope gone,
eyes glazed by the blood red dawn.


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"wow thats really nice"
i like your style of writing its very entertaining to read!!


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Kayliegh_May
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I tried to make it sound pretty... to contrast it but... this is the closest I myself could get.


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wow, everything you write is neet..


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Kayliegh_May
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Thanks Kat. I appreciate it.


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I use to be in medical so it is nice to get this perspective. I have also been in a car accident and I remember strong, and kind people


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Kayliegh_May
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I've never actually been in a car accident, all I know is they seem to happen in seconds, but the after effects drag out... >_< I tried so hard to make it sound all but devastating... But eh. *random e-hug*


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wonderful interpetation. Yes they do happen in seconds and its all over with in a few minutes and everyone's life is changed forever.


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Kayliegh_May
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Thanks, but I couldn't find your poem.


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Go to the discussion tab. Click it and you will see it. I may not have posted at the time you went to look at it as sometimes they shut things down but it is there now plus a new one I just submitted.
"To have, Or Have Not" written in 95 and my new one " Special Moments, Never Forgotten"
Hope you find them


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