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Kayliegh_May
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Maybe my addiction is the friction and the way it pulls me down,
I’ll cling to something else that’s bright to try and turn it around,
But I’m faltering and looking in at myself, knowing I carry a bruise,
and that all this smiling and idle talk is just a self bidden ruse,
I try to push you deeper down to where you no longer remain,
but I’m not fooling myself nor you in this image, I can no longer abstain,
so I’ll curl up in the sheets and tangle myself just trying to forget,
but all I end up doing is pulling in more of this hate and regret,
I tried to see you a villain in hopes that my heart would finally let go,
though without me clasped within your heart I have ceased to shimmer and glow.

-KTCM


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nice....like this


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moi aussi XD


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Kayliegh_May
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Merci beaucoup. =3


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Deep..lots of meaning!


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Kayliegh_May
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I try, if poetry is shallow and meaningless it has become a rap song. JKS No offense to those who like rap. I'm just a smartass. =P


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@ kayliegh.....im gonna say thats true about the meaningless poetry.


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Kayliegh_May
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Haha well I was just kidding but at the same time, most rap really is meaningless. Though there are a few songs I've heard that are truly like poetry with deep content and real meaning. Rare but precious like gems.


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@ kayliegh...yeah thats true but its so rare it almost dosent exsist.


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Kayliegh_May
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And that's what makes it precious.


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i really like the flow of this, really well done


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Kayliegh_May
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Thank you once again Heh.


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