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filling my head with these fantasies
guiding the horizon from the captured window
a chain of shadows, colliding in my mind
whispers in the background, shouting
i'm the king of the playground
trying to hold me down
needles and knives can't save me now
so many colourful pills, the sea couldn't compare
change me, i'm made to be broken
can't stop the smiling, there's an emptiness
where joy should be
if i can't see you, you can't see me
they poured rings of sunlight on me
called shame
locked me in my chambers
but i'm the king, the king of the playground


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lots of thoughts there Brittany. checked your profile and liked what I saw.
Being a musicians is a wonderful way and gift to express yourself too. I never had that talent except I could dance like a fool when I was young.
We all can become broken but we all have an inner strength that no one can take away. I enjoyed your poem.


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thank you very much XD
i thik we all have talent, somethings ppl take for granted
i can't dance, never could lol


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I read this off out loud with a few others to my partner and we both went WOW. Your ability to create a vivd pic for the mind is great. Yes we are the surviors and those who try to break may think they won but "NOT"


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thank you very much
this is very encouraging, you have no iea how happy i am to read these XD


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thats really deep and meaningful, it made me sad. you have talent


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thank you very much
it is sad lol


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you\ve a got a beautiful way of describing things. Its so easy to relate too.


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thank you very much again


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