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After You Left....(plz comment what you think) - Writers Nook

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Adriann_Trevino
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The moment you left it felt like my heart was torn from me and put through medieval torture The moment you left wasn’t supposed to be because of me I try every day to find a way to get you back But then I realize that there’s nothing I can do now It’s hard for me to comprehend that your gone cause when I sleep I dream of you But the moment I wake up I feel the pain in my heart all over again It’s hard to believe that those few months with you could change me so much I, who would’ve easily enjoyed the silence I have now, Cannot stand this silence without you here Will it be all right if I cry out your name every night, to wish you were in my arms instead of this pillow I hold? To dream of you holding me, kissing me, smiling at me, doing everything I love as if you were here instead of six feet under.


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Ella_Castro
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wow!!! that was really good i can feel the depth of the feeling u were portraying in the poem that was deep ..great job!!


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Adriann_Trevino
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Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it.


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