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Jazmin_T._Jones

short love poem....random - Poetry Group

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I just want you to be
the best I ever had
The one I can go to
mad, or sad
I need you to be
the one I come home to, after a bad day at work
My special lady
woman I will never hurt
And I know you
will never hurt me
What can I say
if its real love we will be


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Erin_M_Ballantine
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i like this, but it feels incomplete. i know it says right in the title that it is a short love poem, but it feels not quite finished. maybe that's just me. maybe it's the point. i like your style, though.


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erins right it dose feel incomplete.


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