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Erin_M_Ballantine
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not words
or actions
that could
explain
it is neither time
nor place
and it cannot
be named

its the plane
between
your lips
and mine
its the time
passed through
the light
in your eye

a moment
of truth
in control
relinquished
a moment
of strength
beyond
our weakness

an idea
a whisper
a breeze
through a tree
a shout
a cry
a sigh
to let it be

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I would love any title suggestions.


Erin_M_Ballantine
Posted

no one will help me with a title?


Posted

it sounds like everything that happens.....a moment in time.

not sure...


Erin_M_Ballantine
Posted

i'm thinking maybe just: 'let it be'


Posted

Oh I really like this poem I would love to be the reciprocant
...what about "I Know" or " It's There"


Erin_M_Ballantine
Posted

Maybe, "One Moment."

Though I like Jeanie's ideas too. When I started writing this it was actually about two things (or at least a comparison of two things). the first is sex and the the second is prayer. I have an extensive theory about how praying and sex are, on a very basic level, the same thing....I won't go into it now.


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how about ( suspended moments)


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or just (suspended)


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To me Erin sex is a meditation of acting on ones feelings that can possible touch your soul so I can see where your thinking is.



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