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That is really well written. It sounds like the writer was trying to be straight because thats what she was suppose to be but hating it. and then got out. But then it would to me because that is my story. I tried so hard to be what i was supposed to be. then I got real. I am not straight I'm a lesbian. I awoke from my self induced nightmare.


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Kat, I really like this. I love the imagery and the analogy to Alice in Wonderland. It is brilliant, and makes me want to go read Alice in Wonderland again in this sort of new light. I totally get every line.


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Erin and kelly, "thank you."


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..cool.


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