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You’ve brought me into a trance.
Into a place I’ve never been before;
Warm feelings replace the cold and
dreary ones that once consumed
me. I feel free again.
You take me higher then mountain
tops, we soar past memories and
valleys that run deep in our minds.
Then you take me low. You bring
me to my darkest memories, and
light the way whole heartedly.
You’ve shown me a love that burns
brighter than the stars themselves.
For once, let’s be selfish and keep
it to ourselves! I don’t want to lose
this feeling, for the first time I am
happy.
Sparks fly from your velvet lips. Tell
me your story; I want to know about
you. How do you change the colour
in your voice? You taunt me with a
single look, but I want to know more.
What’s behind those deep blue eyes?
You keep it hidden from me, making
me want the answers so much more.
And then you do it again. Take me higher,
higher than any man has ever dreamed.
Take me to your god. We’ll worship him
together and sing and dance with the angels.
For once be truly accepted for who we are,
and what we are.
But then something has changed, you’ve
brought me down low again. You’ve left
me to die. You’ve stripped my wings and
cornered me. Whipped and beaten I lay
there waiting for something that I know
will never come. Blood drips from my
brow. Oh angel of mercy, save me!
Starved of real emotion. Scared to reach
out. I will stay in this dungeon for all of
eternity.


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i really really like this!!
i can relate to it yeah, but it is so passionate both when you were in love and in the end when you were in pain.( not that its about you) but it dosent matter because you are good at bringing passion in to your work.
great!!


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You write so beautifully, vividly, and emotionally graphically. (if that makes sense) The Highth of the highs and the depths of the pain are so incredible. you are very well written. never stop, even if you stop posting here. Always, kel


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@ kelly that makes total sense,,cassie's poetry is powerful on so many level's....not to mention she put words together beautifully.


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haha thanks, yes, it was about me. it was supposed to have a happy ending, but, i took a turn in emotion while i was writing, i guess that kinda effected the poem...


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kool nice turn.... it worked excellent in this.



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