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can't fuckin get a break these days
here and there, here and there
voices all around me all wanna be heard
tell me to listen, tell me to do this
suffocatin, rearrangin
tryin to live my life
and
figure
shit
out
can't even get a break for that
can't separate these voices all rambling at once
comin from all directions
tryin to give me direction?
figure out your shit first, before tryin to fix mine
passin judgements left and right, this and that,
this
and
that
i'm sick of listenin to nonsense
will somebody please make sense?
stress, madness, depression
the worst Hell is the one between your ears
im sinkin deeper, floatin further
soul searchin type crap doesn't work anymore
when your soul is slippin away from you
when things stop feelin real, and quite surreal
feelin the pressure, goin under-pressure
wide awake thru the AM, zombiefied by the PM
wanna scream, sick of wonderin if this is all a dream
nothing's what it seems


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Posted

Man, that is so deep. I love this kind of poetry. I tried once to write one but it didn't pan out well. You are good at this, Great job, love the poem. I'm feeling it.


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Hey, thank you :] I really appreciate it.


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Annette_Diaz
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You know this is soooooo awesome, I loved it. I can really relate to this because I'm going through the madness now. I really like your work and how express yourself.

Annette


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Crystal_Jewel
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You really expressed yourself very well. I love it great Job.


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