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all
hands
bury
the
dead
floating gently, oak creeps between hands and heads
a synchronized displays on cold cement
the great and final descent
the soul has fled and we pray
the chizzled letters contain a message
to weathered hearts in the soft summer rain
religious texts of salvation from pain
wash through the threads of graves and between
the faces in wings


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Marina_Liesau
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that's good


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Melissa_Crocker
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thats awesome your body to the poem has a strong message and your words resemble one true loss of a loved one


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Ashley_Dinn
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well writen


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William_Becker
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I like your poem and I like you.


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William_Becker
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I look forward to seeing more.


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