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The Middle O( a Mess! - Writers Nook

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Ashley_Silva_46787
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Maybe one day


We will be together


Leaving our past behind


Only needing eachother


Until that day comes


I will cry


The reason, you may ask


My life is a lie


I'm so vulnerable


And easily hurt


Used in my past


Treated like dirt


Yet I wear a smile


Each and every day


But when I'm alone


It quickly fades away


You don't understand


How much pain I hide


For it has faded


And jumped deep inside


I thought you were different


Then all the rest


But look where you got me


The middle of this mess


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Good I like it


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Ashley_Silva_46787
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thankies hun(:


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Sandra_Rodrigo
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Thats sweet. I thought it was interesting how it went from talking about hope of the future to "I thought you were different." Its seemed to condence time so smoothly that you don't even notice till you get to the end that time has already passed.


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