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Hey. Just a poem i turned out, would appreciate it if you told me what you thought etc.

"Beautiful Stranger"

have we not met beautiful stranger?
have we not held each other warmly?
luscious kisses planted in our gardens
tended to my oozing blossom
felt the running vines between my legs
dainty fingers on my weary thorns
unkempt bushes and juicy fruits
beautiful stranger do not linger
love me here, in blissful eden.




i think it is pretty obvious what it is about. (if you liked it tell me what you thought etc)


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Raymond_Massia
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its great love the metifor in it


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It ok, I like it


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