Deleted-User Posted August 4, 2010 Overthought. Overcast life not worth the open eyes I need to rise above these clouds and lies It's overgrown and overdone This way we go about With chapels and tradition, Rituals and true religion, Why do we not fear these things? Tornadoes in the making, Tsunami waves breaking; Is it ever worth it all? Overload. God wouldn't want this, God would'nt want this, God woul'dnt want this, God wou'ldnt want this: Hideous mistakes and earthquakes. Man has made a mess With blood and broken glass And crusaders in the rain. Overthrow the superficial Revolt yourself from overlords: Floods in the making, Covenants breaking, Why do we not fear these things? Is it ever worth it all? Overthought.
Kim_Evans_43954 Posted August 4, 2010 Excellant reminds me of Slam poetry. I can see someone reciting this in a dark nook in the back of some small coffee shop. Do you post elsewhere?