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Marina_Liesau
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screaming, the angels hover over me, wings tipped with blood spread wide. Awestruck, yet horrified by their beauty, I search for a place to hide. They follow, eyes blazing with fury that I'm not in hell burning. My limbs ache from all the crouching and hiding. They sense my fear, my pain, finding me instantly. I scream for help, yet people claim it's simple insanity. This world is f***ed, my old life is done. Yet the pain and agony has just begun. They cast me down, singing with triumph that I am gone. Screaming, the angels continue to sing their song. Whilst I burn forever... Yeah I know it sucks...sorry


Ashley_Dinn
Posted

No it does not. I like it


Marina_Liesau
Posted

thanks


Arie_Portishead
Posted

never critisize your peotry, oh god..... critisize my misspelling instead... but it was good and emotional go ahead! let it all out!



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