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Ashley_Ortega

Loveless Lover - Writers Nook

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Silent Sleeper
Hear me whisper
Hopes and dreams
Please do deliver,
Depth and breath
With no despair,
Feel the choking
And gasp for air

With everyone hiding
And nothing to seek
It seems the golden sky
Turns grey and bleak
A seeker seeking
The treasure of love
Your darkness ensuing
From the heavens above

Please bring end
To this evil reign
And save me from
This joyous pain
Unknown Soldier
Please give me closure
And bring me back
When it's all over


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Lee_Bauer
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Wow, absolutely amazing.


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well thank you lee, its nice to hear good things about my work


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Heather_McLean
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I like this - heartfelt, with the raw language speaking honestly.


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It could make a killer song too! =) fantastic!


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