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well things with the guy I was seeing, I guess have to an end...I really don't know how I currently feel about him...other than feeling hurt...but well I decided to write it down into a poem...it may need some work so if any of you have any suggestion or criticism...feel free to write them down...but here it goes...

The Last of Our Days

Today’s the last day his arms embraced me,
the last day his body lies next to mine,
the last day I wish for what will not be,
the last day he becomes worth my time.

Today’s the last day I live love’s dream,
the last day I hold on to nothing,
the last day for us it would seem,
the last day I’ll feel his painful sting.

Today’s the last day he brings me to tears,
the last day he has a hold over my heart,
the last day his charm reaches my ears,
the last day he tears my soul apart.

Today’s the last day I will ever feel down,
the last day I care more for him than myself,
the last day he’ll see me hanging around,
this is his last day with me now he is by himself.


Peter_Morris
Posted

Beautiful and sad. Today is the last day you will feel down with him but probably not the last day ever


Posted

Every day is a first day, Jony. Your poem is very sweet. I like it a lot.



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