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Slow movements, I utterly move
Do u know I am torn in two?

Tears slowly moved down my face
Why do I feel like such a disgrace?

My face I turn to the side
Only to have this feeling disguised

Do you hear my cries over there?
Talk to me, please I do not only a stare

I'm scared to show my tears to you
I hope you still love me as I feel for you

My words I speak I do not manipulate
You say I speak and puts my heart to break

I never lied or never cheated
Why am I taking this beating?

My mind, my heart two different places
Tears my emotions in different cases

Hear me out for one more moment
This deeply hurts me did you know it?


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Hermosa. Esperando para leer más de su escritura :-)


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I have no idea to say this awesome or . . . . . . b/c It's kinda heartbreaking poem , Amanda .. Please do allow me to write something for you ... But I gotta let my brains work lol . . . Here I go . . .

Many of us , been through the stage
Broken hearts that were torn into pieces
But some hearts found their happiness
There are some hearts locked in the cage

The times when you n her used to chase
It's memories that can't be erase
I know tears might cover your whole face
No ... why would you feel disgrace

She might be still here or there
Maybe she still care ?
How about allow some time ?
And see If there's any signs

I know , she's the only you need now
But your friends are around
We can't see what you have been through
But our thoughts are with you

Give yourself a little rest
A short break will be the best
Your heart n your mind
A little while , It will be fine

Give yourself a little moment
I know the hurt sometimes burn
And I know you still love her
How about write her a letter ?


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this post keeps getting better now :-) Beautiful wordings Ella :-)


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I speak my words with many feelings
For her, she excludes the meanings

I get close and am pushed away
There are things I could not say

My heart screams for her to listen
instead it is the tears that glisten

Repeat of things that happen before
In the depth, my heart still feels sore

I am quiet and let her speak
is that wrong to not let her hear me?

A letter is good for she will see
Yet I am afraid that she will that I am weak

I give her my strong side to lean on
My shoulder to even cry on

She will say this is beautiful
My words get somewhat meaningful

Why is hard for me to be weak?
For this the real me?




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Purely Beautiful :-) Love the way you put down such emotions in writing. Brilliant :-)


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Thanks shabs that's how I feel apparently. I do not know how she will respond if she reads these poems


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KAREN_WENDI
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they are special. i feel ur over reacting hun
i really do
ily
xo k


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Thanks Amanda for your poems. For me they represent moments in time, which I remember, and I moved on from them...life can be bleak and therein lies the hope.
I look forward to reading more of your work.

xStephenX


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KAREN_WENDI
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YOU MADE ME FEELALIVE
YOU MADE ME FEEL SO DIFFERENT
YOU MADE ME
TIME GOES SO FAST
TIMES GOES SOSLOWLY WITHOUT YOU
A SONG A FLOWER A SUNGLE PHRASE
REMINDS ME LOVE OF YOU
I SEE YOUR FACE A THOUSAND TIMES
I KISS UR LIPS ONCE AGAIN
SO YOU SEE AFTER ALLTHESE YEARS
I STILL CU
YOU MADE ME FEEL ALIVE
A SONG A FLOWER A SIMPLE PHRASE REMINDS ME LOVE OF YOU
I SEE YOUR FAVCE A THOUSAND TIMES I KISS YOUR LIPS ONCE AGAIN
SO YOU SEE AFTER ALL THESE YEARS
I STLL LOVE YOU... '' YOU MADE ME FEEL ALIVE''


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KAREN_WENDI
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OUBLISGED BOOK OF ANTHOLOGY OF POETRY ASCAP SOND MUSIC AND LYRICS
85 MORE
TC K


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Karen I was just frustrated that you blamed me for things that you could not see. Its hard to say things and you say that I lie or manipulate. That is why I wrote these poems.


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