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Rose to Dread - Your WRITES

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Dontavien_Marine
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Roses are Red
And violets are Blue
Time moves too slowly
While sitting in school
I love to hang out
With all my friends by my side
If you truly love me
Then that do not hide
Storms may cause messes
Where ever they hit
Some people won't help you
To deal with your shit
The sun may be gold
As the water is blue
Feel free to tell me
"Baby I love you"
The moon shines a silver
And the flame burns bright red
If you break my heart
It will fill me with dread.


(In stead of double posting this poem I'm going to post it in it's alternate morw understandable form.)

Roses are Red, And violets are Blue.
Time moves too slowly, While sitting in school.
I love to hang out, With all my friends by my side.
If you truly love me, Then that do not hide.
Storms may cause messes, Where ever they hit.
Some people won't help you, To deal with your shit.
The sun may be gold, As the water is blue.
Feel free to tell me, "Baby I love you."
The moon shines a silver, And the flame burns bright red.
If you break my heart, It will fill me with dread.


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Dontavien_Marine
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I wrote this when I was with my ex boyfriend in high school. It was our second time going out and I new that he would end up breaking my heart. I hope you enjoy and I can't wait for the feed back.


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Brittany_Patterson_37080
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This is amazingly good I love your rhyme sceam and all keep up the good work


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Dontavien_Marine
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Thank you. I'll post more later.


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Brittany_Patterson_37080
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Good you should is love to read it


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Dontavien_Marine
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I posted a new one and more is to come. I'll prob post another within the hour.


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