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17 years of pain, bottled up and hidden by a sulken look.
He stood, outside his uncles door, weapon in hand, ready.
Nothing else mattered, it was now, it was time.
Flashes of angry memorys, painfull, unimaginable.
Behind him a light, throwing his shadow against the door.
Suddenly he realised, this is more surreal, attention!
A sudden fear married him, what is this to face.
He slowly turned, blinded, he covered his eyes, and cried out.
'who are you, speak up', followed by a dim noise, he froze.
Deep in the pits of his soul, he was lifted, unable to move,
he was risen high and taken by an un-seen force, towards the window.
all his eyes could see was distance, a drug-like state of dream.
his paralysis took over, and covered the journy to the conciousness
finally, it stopped, and eyes wide, his shadow cast upon the door again.
looking down at his hand, realisation sunk in, he threw his weapon,
and without further thinking of haste, he turned and walked away,
never looking back and thinking he said to himself,
'ahead, walk ahead, back there shall never matter, ahead, is where i am'
He then realised, it was his 'Awakening'


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This is so powerful.


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Thank you Carol, oh and thanks for the add.


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Excellent writing


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Thankyou Shabs.


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