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Sweetest Elixir - Poetry Group

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David_Kirkpatrick_61460
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Love---Life's sweet narcotic,

Nature's own drug, deep within us,

Basic to us---the chaotic, the romantic,

How mind and spirit crave the wondrous;

Feeling filling all provinces of our being;

Through Love, the heart knows the best of life;

By, Love, only, fully human are we;

'til comes the Other, our life is so much dreaming;

Less Me, more We, this Love makes us alive;

Sweet Elixir, within, ignites us like a star.


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Tommy_Storey
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Vary good,David .............


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I love this, falling in love is the most amazing feeling ever. Being loved does make you feel alive! Thank you!


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David_Kirkpatrick_61460
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Thank you, sweet Tom!


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David_Kirkpatrick_61460
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Thank you, Debbie: I am very, very honored that you liked it. Warm regards, David


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A very good poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.


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David_Kirkpatrick_61460
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Thank you, Mark ! I am very pleased and honored that you liked it ! : )


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