Jump to content

changed - Poetry Group

Recommended Posts

Posted

I know this is what you do
so I try to understand
when the cruel you is too cutting
and your expression turns so bland.

Your messages become callous,
your judgement is clouded by doubt,
and any attempts to reach you
are brutally frozen out.

There's no visible rhyme nor reason
for you to act in this cold way.
You leave no room for rapport
when your dark side clears its way.

But at least know that I recognise,
that this is what you do.
I remember your alter ego
and I save a soft spot for you.


Share this post


Link to post
Bobbye_L._Webb
Posted

Very nice! I could apply this to a lot of people in my world.


Share this post


Link to post
Tommy_Storey
Posted

Yes,Ola, Vary Good .........


Share this post


Link to post
Posted

ty


Share this post


Link to post
David_Kirkpatrick_61460
Posted

This poem is especially beautiful-- touched me deeply-- I know the kind of thing you're talking about; I've kept a torch burning for a long time. I'm at the point at which I am ready to see if someone else is worth the while of me lighting another torch.......... : ) You never get waiting time back, and I've waited long already. VERY fine poem, Ola! David


Share this post


Link to post
Posted

ty David its always worth looking as the love u eventually find is worth the hurt u may suffer xxx good luck and have fun in the search lol


Share this post


Link to post

×