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Siany_Silc
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Well now, we are no longer friends.
You should never have ignored me, and blanked me out.
Should have talked to me when I gave you the chance.
They said don't be mean to me, but that didn't help either.
No longer, friends and it is your entire fault.
Should have paid attention to me.
You have no one to blame but yourself.
You are now just a memory, which lingers in the past, with no future, no meaning.
And no me to help you when you get nuked down.
You can look for me.
But if you find me, I will just ignore you, for from this moment on you are nothing.


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Tommy_Storey
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Vary abslilute.but also vary to the point,and Huart Felt. Tommy,x


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That is exactly how I felt when a friend did that to me too =/ This poem shows how I feel too .. *LIKES*


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It is so sad when you think you have something special with someone but it turns into just someone you used to know


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What a wonderful poem I just love reading poems like this.


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I couldn't agree more with you Carol. Yes , It's sad .. We used to talk n laugh almost everyday. Then suddenly one day , she just stop talking .. n left me puzzled only. Her theory n promises that she have made , vanished too .. That's why I love this poem ..


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Falling into nothingness

You promised so much
But now all I have is nothing
I fell into to a vast pit of nothingness
Which left me empty and cold

What am I to do miss you forever
Because I know I'll love you forever
So now I'll grow lonely and old

Nothingness consumes me now
Like a pit in my stomach
It is never to be filled up

This hungry feeling
Grows and grows
Who do I feed on if not you

In my dreams I walk the night
I look for you but you're not there
Darkness all around
Where is your laughter
Oh I miss that sweet sound

Gone now
Yes your gone
No I won't forget you
Our love will never die
I still lay in tears asking why

So here I am in my nothingness
Empty and cold
Like an empty cup
I'll never be filled up

I fell for you
But I'm still falling
Deeper and deeper
Into this vast hole

Darker and darker
Deeper and deeper
Down, down down
I go

With nothing but nothingness all around me now


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waw .. m totally amazed by this work of urs Carol ) I love the 5th n 6th paragraph xx

[[ In my dreams I walk the night
I look for you but you're not there
Darkness all around
Where is your laughter
Oh I miss that sweet sound

Gone now
Yes you're gone
No I won't forget you
Our love will never die
I still lay in tears asking why ]]

I did ask myself , I didn't cry .. Okay I did cry just a little while .. I miss my friend's laughter too. Wherever she is , I hope whenever she is ready to find me , I will always be her friend .. Though she might not care anymore .. This poem is really very nice Carol

Ella xx


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Tommy_Storey
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Carol,,& Siany, I enjoyed Reading,all of your Work`s Vary Much. To the two of you, WELL DONE.xx


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