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Amber_Javadi
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Life has its twists and turns.
Scraps, cuts and burns.

Sadest thoughts surrounds you with all its might,
But you have to stand tall and fight,
In life there will be fright.

Walk through and summon the light.
Be as one and be so strong.
Being wrong doesn’t mean you
Give up.
What do you see when you look in the mirror,
You or just a reflextion.


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Royce_Tan
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I like the way you describe life and it's challenges, but I think you could play up more on what you imagine is the 'Self' or who 'You' are.


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