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Hey guys how are you all doing? I really need some support, I just started wrtting songs..well not BARELY but just started "posting them up" I posted the lyrics to the very first song I completed up on my blog which I will post the link to in the bottom. Its a rap and I really wanna know what you all think about it, check it out and let me know. I've been getting a lot of positive feedback on it so I'm gonna be doing a video rapping "the chase" which includes the beat. So just check it out and please let me know what you think. Much love, Evepidemic
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Evelyn. I've never written songs, but if I were going to, I would use some of my poetry as something to write about. That was what Jim Morrison of The Doors did.


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Hey Mark, yeah that's what I first started doing. These were all just poems then I started rhyming a bit more and adding more to my songs


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okay, tell me what you think of this. could it be a song?

Would You Remember Me

If we saw each other tomorrow

or perhaps in another lifetime or place

would you remember me

would you remember my name, my face?
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Could it be the same

or would that be an impossibility

am I to take all the blame.
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I like to believe we could start over

forget our differences and forgive our trespasses

as we would want others to forgive us

or is this just a nightmare I will never awaken from?
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Don't judge me, until you have walked a mile in my shoes

don't try to make me something you want me to be

but accept me for who I am

that's all I ask of you.
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So I ask of you

would you remember me

if we were to see each other tomorrow

or perhaps in another lifetime...my lover

my reason for living, my soulmate.


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